Unit 1 evaluation

we did a 100-pages-book by cooperation about rough guide, the unit 1 project, for adapting new soundings and wake up our nerve to accept a total new collage world.

As I wrote, I quite interested in the floor on the way of the road, and each mark and dot on the street can tell us a fantastic story about a block. So I try to recorded what I saw on the way I've been.

Obviously, the drafts I did are more about photograph, few development on these painting except the lightness adjusting for the atmosphere of environment. I used groups of picture to construct my painting.But the method I used in these time maybe not that suitable. It make it more like a photograph book and it is little bit mess.especially a page about a shop with flower pattern, the proportion of colour is loose balance which I cannot express the effect I want to show on my draft, and it looks like a kind of lack of relevance.

The final page i chosen is about expressing the floor beside underground, the most satisfied part is that combining the pattern of the floor tile with the railing of entrance of tube. Because I want to show the location more clearly when I photo the mark.


In the blog, I tried to type what I choosed,obviously the article the short and the it has a lot of mistake , I still need to practice my use of language on the writing so that i can type what I really want to say and catch the point.but it's a good start to describe. In theory task, I mentioned that the reason why i use floor tile to be my theme, then added some pictures on it. What I thing now is I can write more particular things like the history of one street, the weather which cause the pattern on the floor, and the similar object as the pattern,etc. There still has a lot of space to improve.


Therefore, in unit 1,for the book making ,it's a little bit merge and weird on my draft, but the last decision is almost what I want.and for the blog, I think it would be better to fill some particular things if I want to write a article next time.